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Opinions please. Oct. 20th, 2009 @ 06:08 AM Reply

I want you people to say something about this particular piece. I want you to point out the thjings I have to improve please.

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Response to Opinions please. Oct. 20th, 2009 @ 06:12 AM Reply

here's another one:

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Response to Opinions please. Oct. 20th, 2009 @ 11:27 AM Reply

One thing that stands out to me is the line work. Very messy/scribbly-looking. Try cleaning it up a bit, and making it a little more solid. Might wanna polish up the coloring, as well. Other than that, they aren't bad. =)

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Response to Opinions please. Oct. 20th, 2009 @ 12:31 PM Reply

On the other hand, you could try to go for a more loose style, keeping the line art scribbly and doing more raw looking coloring, but the smooth coloring and loose linework don't really compliment each other, imo.

Keep at it though, I do like your art, you seem to (judging only from the first picture) have a pretty good handle on contemporary japanese anime style. =]


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Response to Opinions please. Oct. 21st, 2009 @ 04:10 AM Reply

At 10/20/09 12:31 PM, BlackmarketKraig wrote: On the other hand, you could try to go for a more loose style, keeping the line art scribbly and doing more raw looking coloring, but the smooth coloring and loose linework don't really compliment each other, imo.

Keep at it though, I do like your art, you seem to (judging only from the first picture) have a pretty good handle on contemporary japanese anime style. =]

Okay does this look better? I think I fixed the lines. And I also improved the shading.

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Response to Opinions please. Oct. 29th, 2009 @ 10:45 PM Reply

I just made a tankman. In my own version.

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Response to Opinions please. Oct. 30th, 2009 @ 02:16 AM Reply

The head is too small, the chin isn't pointy enough, the eyes aren't big and shiny enough, and I can still tell what gender it is.

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Response to Opinions please. Oct. 30th, 2009 @ 03:14 AM Reply

At 10/30/09 02:16 AM, boblo wrote: The head is too small, the chin isn't pointy enough, the eyes aren't big and shiny enough, and I can still tell what gender it is.

Lern2anime.

It isn't necessarily true anime, but it's close and he's putting effort into those works. He also could just be doing it for fun...

At any rate, maybe you shouldn't presume he's making something else than what he's really making. And if he's not necessarily new or not skilled like others, than it's fine to be sloppy. You learn from it.

Jeez, it's not like this is a professional showcase or anything.

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Response to Opinions please. Oct. 30th, 2009 @ 04:22 AM Reply

Oh that, that's my art ages ago. Try seeing my version tankman. I've really improved since then. I'm just keeping these drawings for the lulz. I see you didn't even scroll down, did ya?


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Response to Opinions please. Oct. 30th, 2009 @ 06:54 PM Reply

hmm I'm not much of a anime expert but there are volunteers at the artist hospital who might be able to give you more insight.

the link is within my signature area


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