Definately not bad, but gets repitive

Nice music, and nice melody. All in all a very nice piece, but the melody gets kindda boring after a while, almost to the point of becomming anoying. The part where you lower the volume is a nice touch, but it shouldn't be quite so dramatic, and keep the treble up a little more, because it sounds more like you are cupping your hands over the speakers than a nice effect.

But still, with a little more work, this piece could be really, really great. Maybe throw in another melody in there?

Me likey

Very good job. Sounds like some professional house mix that i've heard or something. I especially liked when u started mixing it up some in the middle. Keep up the good work.

PS- no, i won't touch you ;)