good

Pretty nice!

I like the style!

Nice!

Nice job on this one. Everything was pretty good except that some parts were too soft. Still, nice smoothing song!

yay, 100 reviews for me

hey you've got some pretty nice sounds going on here. the only problem is that some of themes are too drawn out, and there is really any connections between the riffs. the track started off with some really nice atmospheric pad sounds, setting up the track with a nice intro. I do like the panned drum beat...but here's were the problem comes. you stopped the pads, and the drum beat was probably drawn out to bit. the subtle synth sounded nice too, but again, too repetive and drawn on. you should have kept the opening pads going on and placed the melodies on top. the bass bit would have been a nice piece for the bridge/chorus to add the song. the second bass bit, is too repetive IMO. once the next phase of the track starts, there is no transition really. it also had an abrupt ending. throughout the song, you could have added a bit more pieces to grab attention more. also, add some better transition riffs to make the track gel together smoother, right now it sounds like your placing random riffs- one after another.

clarity was good indeed, nice use of FX in here.

keep producing music man, not bad for your first upload.