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This needs some improvement, the back beat repeats too much and does not go well with your main beat, it could use some editing and it could be a bit longer, good try though...

~X~

Good Sample

Sounds like you were just messing around and trying something new, but the attempt wasn't that bad and has potential as you gain more experience in the genre. The bass riff is blown to distortion but I think that was what you were going for? But the components that compose this piece work together decently. Keep pumping out more stuff, and you'll come up with some interesting stuff, I'm sure.