Above Average
Originality: This song is very original. I'm a big fan of heavy metal, and this is a new song with new rythms and beats that I havn't heard before, but I can't give it a ten because it doesn't give new meaning to the genre.
Diversity: Well, seeing as how you only have two instruments you can't do much. But you could change the drumming a bit throughout the song.
Clarity: This is the downfall to this music. It doesn't SOUBD good. I mean, you can hear everything, but it sounds like it is coming through a lot of stuff before you put it on newgrounds. It isn't as clear as your other two songs.
Effort: You guys did put an above average effort into this song, I can tell. But if you would have gone that extra 10 or 20%, mabye it'd be even better.
Overall: Above Average. That's all I have to say.