Ugh, Trance...

You're lucky that i even lowered myself to review this, because im no fan of trance.
only really good melodic trance.

Anyways, the start was good.
The kick seems too cliche, and its the FL Kick.
Its the standard snare drum as well.
The standard sounds make me cry.

Melodic - It got some melodies to stick to, increasing it score.

The bass was some times out of order, and created dissonance.

Constructive Critism only, If you feel like going to my songs and voting 0 on em all, i dont really mind as i've stopped producing for NG :p

starting was good

but then you lost it somehow but for a first song you were amazing keep it up and you could be big.

This was terrible,

But hey, you have to start somewhere. Try changing the pitch on the kickdrum so it doesn't sound like it's a FL default kick. Keep trying to make up your own synths in 3xOsc and changing the drums. You'll be good in no time.