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See 1st review for full commentary...I NEED critiques to finish!

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I hear that you're little out of ideas at a certain point, but I like this! You have to listen to what you have in mind carefully. These may sounds horrible to others, yet not to me. Write down the ways the melody has to continue, try playing them one by one and recognizes which ones deserve to been added. Be creative. (PS: I've now thought that you may have already have a finished version and that I havent' looked it up. Checking...)

lol

Mastering sucks, when thats guitar gets it its WAY to loud jesus christ my ears are hurting >:[

Dude...

Well i like the tune, a bit repetitive, but i like it. the main fault is that there are too many leads at once. howabout you take out the guitars, change it to synth, bass, and synth, and add a bit more diversity to the drums. how about a nice drum break, hot off the grill? if you did that this would be awesome. nice stuff, keep doin what u do.

cheers!

Tom-Fanboy responds:

I'm still undecided as to where i want the melody to go (playing along on my real guitar ends up in so many different directions to go). I think my hearts really set on guitars though.

Drums...yeah once again undecided. i'm thinking im gonna go with a drum and strum break down with no lead. Haven't found a change to the drums i like yet, but I'm deffinitely going for more drum diversity if i can.

Keep in mind this is only a few hours into the project, I plan on adding a lot more, none of that build loops and face them out crap. More is to be written in the melodies and such.

meh, nothing too new...

overall the track wasn't TOO original from the stuff I've listened to so far..I guess the guitars give the track some more originality. and this could pretty much be classified as techno.

the saw synth blends in nicely with the drums...good beat you've worked out here. I like the guitar riff, but I do not like FL slayer. most people dont. the first guitar track sounds alright for a rhythm sound, but try using something different for your lead guitar, atleast thats just my opinnion. I don't like the distortion sound really. atleast you restrained from using the default FL slayer guitar LOL.

nothing much to suggest other than you suggested already. mess with the equal levels a bit, give the bassline some more punch. its nice that youve already panned both guitars. but try to center them a little more, just a teeeny weeeny bit. might give the track a more fuller sound. the volume is a bit too loud, try putting a compressor on it or lowering some of the volume a bit...also, either my speakers may be dying but the track slowly fades, but not all the way out..its not like the track ended, so theres no need to put the fade effects in here...again, may just be my hardware. and unlike you said, I think the intro blends in alright with the guitar.

not too shabby!

Tom-Fanboy responds:

Yeah I'm tweeking the guitars still (if i get some money coming I'll be able switch to real guitar). It think I almost have them where i want.

I think I might give a more explosive jump from the techno saw into the guitar.

Yeah I'm going over tutorials to learn about compressors right now. Also the final version will have more diversity than this, I'm debating a 3rd guitar.

It's me the Creator!

So I'm always making weird hybrids of sounds so first off...I have no clue what genre to throw this in...dance? rock? i dunno...

So far I'm still building this but i thought I'd submit it to see if i can catch errors early...now this has NOT been EQed yet and for once i will be doing that before the final one to be released on my other alias: Lesbian-waffles (has my complete stuff)

So do you like the weird blend? Do certain samples make you wanna tear your ears out? Got any advice to better it? Some instruments need more "umph" and other less?

Stuff in mind already:
---Intro will blend into the guitar strum better...
---EQ

BTW all this was made just using FLstudion presets...and yes, that's Slayer (what i would do for a guitar USB adapter)

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Uploaded
Jul 5, 2007
6:18 AM EDT
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2.2 MB
1 min 55 sec

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