i'm slightly flabbergasted
You got me a bit flabbergasted here. I feel some kind of attraction-repulsion about this song. The tunes are, from beginning to end, childish yet at the same time deeply thoughtful, simultaneously soothing and repulsive. That paradoxical element is, in itself, worth merit.
I don't know whether this is the product of somebody knowledgable in music theory who frantically wants to break its laws, or rather of some kid that started making music without any prior musical experience but has an extremely unusual natural feel for it. That's what crosses my mind with any of your songs. However, given the clearly thoughtful build-up of this song, it's probably the former.
The main theme (the omnipresent organ tune) wasn't something I found special. It's everything around it that struck me. The careful bleeps, the bridges/breakdowns in between the main loop, the background ambience. Actually, I believe the song would have been VERY interesting to listen to if the main theme was different.
3/5 8/10
Deathkavaderva 
