No, not that good
Don't get me wrong it sounded nice, but I used FL Studio, and apparently it seems to me that you just remixed another song, instead of compiling your own composure. You didn't even do that much to it either, the full song itself (except the beginning) was the same exact loop over and over. Not only that but it also seems to just be cut off at the end. So in all fairness it seems like you didn't even try that hard.