i am the people

i am the people, and we have spoken... 3 pointers
1) rave is harder
2) tune is good
3) its totally a pokemon battle song... it just sounds right.

so to conclude the concluded conclusion;
8/10... it needs more "UMPH!"...........whatever that means.......

Hey! :)

Took me long enough, huh? But I was going to get to this soon enough... :P

A bit of a slow intro - I was expecting something faster, better. You know what I mean? The intro to Tranceformation(I'm not going to bother checking if I spelled it the same as you did), for example... that was golden. :D

Once the song DOES get going, though... it's good! :D The string thing is a bit old, but it works. :D

Nice use of that sliding bass guitar! :D Used very well. Not too much else to say about it, but you used it creatively and you were creative to use it in the first place. :D Also your melodywork is very good, though could do with a bit more rhythmic diversity.

That bass of yours is on the offbeat... and it's not very original of you to do that. I mean, sure, it works! :D But I've gotten past that and you've been at it for... what, just as long as I have? Longer? XD Come on, you're better than that. Arp it, delay it, go crazy, just don't drop it on the offbeat and walk away. ;)

Hmm. When you use the reversed kick... is it just me, or does the song distort? Careful. :P In fact, the song's clarity is... second-rate. And that reminded me... I've been mastering my songs a bit lately, and experimenting with different kinds of speakers and headphones. They've been sounding a lot better, too. :D Even if it just means using Fruity Parametric EQ 2 or something, you should give it a try sometime, it really makes your songs sound a LOT better. Right now... your hihat is weak, and the kick distorts in places - again, especially when distorted. Mastering can make that better without touching the volume knobs. >:)

Sheesh, you know what I realized? I sound like I'm advertising mastering. But really, you should give it a try sometime. :P

That's about it, hope I've helped! :) Looking forward to your next song, hopefully it'll be even better. :D

Great work!

This piece has a great melody, and the harmony helps it as well. I wouldn't agree completely with my-garbage, I like your drum patterns, but some way that you mixed your hi-hats/snare just seems a bit off (don't get me wrong, they're good). I also like the effects you use, they are well placed.

Hope you keep up the good work - - Shenkhar

Reminds me of fighting music

Let me guess. Fruity loops? Those drums are way over used. I can't blame you though. Too many people use FL on this site. Can you make your own drums? I think all the FL premade drum loops have been used already by other artists. Like at 46 seconds in. Bad thing is that common bass and clapping loop. Lots of raves have used the style you used in this song. Nothing new. I give 8/10 stars. Lack originality but still a fun listen.

pretty good

i liked it alot 5/5 10/10. keep up the good work.