Nice and smooth
A fantastic pice of sound you have here, right from the start i thought it was pretty good, allthough some areas i might change but thats just me. I like the smooth feel of this one, you gave it a nice smooth and feel to it, Seems like there is some guitar in there and that makes it all good and such, This was just very pleasent, and while there was not much of a build up, maybe thats something you can try and push forward aswell, but anyways its a good piece i thought, hope to see more of your work soon. So that was a decent tune you had in here, Some things could be better i thought but overall i found it to be an interesting tune, and would love to hear more stuff of yours in the near future
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So here we have something good, a decent audio i thought, some things could be changed for a better outcome, but ill just throw out some ideas and then you go with what you think is best. I think the onlything i can really suggest on this piece would to have more "BUILD-UP" but thats pretty much it.