I agree with the last review...

I think the last review pretty much covers what I'm thinking. It could have turned out better, but wasn't. Keep at it though - try to make the song a little more action-packed! : )

Could use a LOT of work

It started promising, but I can hear your just starting, now this isn't a bad thing,
it's just that the samples SCREAM FL pre-set.
Try and get some other samples, try to find some free sample packs, look up some FL tutorials on effects, EQ-ing etc.
Music-wise it sounds pretty decent.