Hmm...

Okay, 4 things....

1: the kicks were way to basic, try putting a techno pounder into the master mixer track of the kick and fooling around with the controls
2: the drums were a bit basic just a kick and the closed hi-hats
3: you need to have a lead synth, not just an arp, i'm assuming your using FL studio, try using a platnium saw in Sytrus
4: It was really repetive, and i saw that you tried to mix up the melody, but i didnt really flow well.
Voted 3/5 Nice try

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