it was verry good

But, the thing was that, it was way to loud, or the samples differd greatly in volume. my speaker was peaking out alot. normally i lesion to the music on here loud so as to hear all the work in the song. But it wasent loud that way, you could just hear the snyths phase out. try droping the DB level about.0683 or if that is to soft...about.135-.125 to much and it will shave off the excitement of the song it self. but i liked it still thoe 4/5 hey i just got up a new battle song, first video game song i made and first remake of a battle so check it out if yah want! but good work bro. peace out
Dooby

okkkkay

Obviously video game- cheesy, catchy melodies and composition.

the song may get a bit messy at parts, which I think is mainly because of the drums you have there. and possibly the horribly off-tune saw

Mentioning that it sounds like your detuned trance saw is played at other notes than they're intended to- it seems like you detuned it first- then you detuned it so much it doesn't sound like the note you're playing

there's a bit of clipping/disortion here, which really isn't good.

Piano sounds pretty good, nothing to comment there. Well played

Drums... wow that's a lot of snare rushes. They're quite annoying to me. I can hardly hear anything else than the snares, I think there may be a crash cymbal there- is it? :/

Overall it's quite a good composition with its flaws, and- terrible mastering

oh yeah and you're supposed to review the two prior submissions when posting a link- it's just something LJCoffee made up a while ago, but you should do so :)