The beritone could use some work, but aside from that I love it!

Dark. Nice!

Ah, the first more dark song I've heard while browing your music today... (I've gone through three so far Very nice. If you would make more evil-sounding songs, that'd be great.

a bit generic, mastering issues, good vibe

Hey Bosa.

There is a great deal of tensive energy in this piece, it flows and screams "trouble", yet I felt there were some mastering issues here. Some of the instruments were too loud, some were too quiet. Like that child choir, I loved its addition to the song, but it was too much in the background to truly notice.

Are these papalmedia choirs?

I also would have liked to see some variation, some kind of overlaying melody. I mean as it stands it seems to be a long string of chords, which leaves a great foundation, but leaves an empty taste in your mouth.

All in all though, a good track! I wish you the best in the contest, i'll see you on the battle field >:}. Keep up the good fight and keep em coming!

noice

pretty threatening and spacish. great for an opening scene to a sci-fi space film.