not bad really.

pretty simple synths...i would suggest looking into more interesting synths for future projects.(i've been looking into some new ones myself).
kinda repetitive, actually really repetitive...so yeah. i know it was supposed to be dance and all but if that was the intended style i think it was an attempt that fell a little short; needed more kick and beat to it.
pretty good clarity, i can tell you put a lot of time into it. i liked the slight delay you put on the leading synth, or perhaps it was just reverb.~
nice effort. i believe w/ some more noticeable melodies, this song could go far. so nice job on this man.

check out my songs if you'd like. I've got a new one pretty soon; hopefully my best^^ 5/5 and 9/10 from me. ill look at your page periodically for new ones. good job.

-crepth