Nord Lead

I think in that part with the porta/ pitch bend, you should use a Nord Lead, or maybe even in the whole song, it lacks sorta a "Bam"/"Epic" Feel.

Unprofessional-sounding, but good

Nice melody, but you still use those very unprofessional-sounding instruments. But it sounds good, so I won't complain too much about that. I'd like to remix it.

good stuff

although the synth in the beginning is odd sounding, and the instruments are kind of beepish (i can't think of the word), the composition itself is excellent. I like how an extremely fast moving melody snakes though interesting chord progressions. nice drum work too. Just try to give the synths a less videogamish sound. unless thats what youre aiming for w/e.
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