hmm?

better than your other tracks and the base idea was good BUT (and this is a big but) the melody was out of key which sounds HORRIBLE.

however it was a good try and a big improvement!

really good sounds and percusion

yea everythings there but no bass line to go with it. well theres a bass line put it doesnt progress. good track tho.

ok i like ti are you happy?

i wonly wish it would have been a little longer.! lookin forward to more from ya.

the only thing...

that could possibly make this song any better. it needs to be longer. id say, make it last for three minutes and you are my new hero.

ah finally a dark one....

after going through your songs, i found a dark one... I must say that i am quite proud of this one... It warms me to the soul... This one is definitly downloaded to go to my personal enjoymeny list... not many songs go there... puff out your chest with pride... I'm always looking forward to your work... keep up your magic...