Score: 10
"lol"
date: November 13, 2008
the below review is horrible. it points out the problem but does not give any elaboration or solutions :(
this song could be perceived as generic. the mix is terrific. and rich. and thick.
you need to experiment with some different melodic ideas, buildups, releases, tension.
the generic beat, breakdown, buildup, climax model has been done billions of time :O
the chords in the break are moving, but if you you alternated them with the tonic beat in a point-counterpoint-bridge style, it would be an epicly more moving song.
if you want me to elaborate i'd love to talk to you over aim. pm me it, i'm prolly not gonna check for a response to this review
this song gets my 10/10, and 5/5, which may contradict my earlier critisism. but let me explain why. epicness and movement are the only things wrong with this song, and really are more fine details
