Awesome!

It was awesome! I disliked the generic crowd cheering samples, they get old after a while.

That airy sound is creepy, to me. It has elements of trance in it, due to builds and breaks.

The vox is good, and some of the drums are too.

I would advise a lead synth, rather than just a few repeating rhythms.

It was good for your first! Keep it up!