Abso Fantastic

Loved the intro and how it built up to better FL synths and heavier arps an stuff... Exelent and I hope it does well...

5\5

Nice work.

I like the intro, and the instruments you used are nice and soft.
The claps were good too but could have some more effects like a reverb.

I like the twinkle sound you used in it, the arpeggiator was nice too but you could replace that with another instrument too.

The melody's were done pretty good, nice work but try to use samples next time and not Fruity Loops Pre-Sets.

Not bad

Ill start this out with it is a pretty nice remix!

Good job on this.

The only advice i have is it sounds a little empty....sssssooo...

1. You should have like 3 or 4 instruments doing the background and like 2 instruments doing the main melody at the same time...This would make it sound MUCH better and more complete.

But you have to be careful to make sure all the background is quieter than the melody...

2. You could add in a high thing like special FX or somthing but this part is entirely up to you and how you want your song.

3. drums need more symbals and stuff.

Anyways i congrajulate you on this you did a nice job! im going to give you a 5/5 to help increase the rating.

pm me later if you make any more pieces!

see ya man.

AWESOME

ONE WORD----- AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sweet

yea this is better. but you still can improve it! get more stuff going at the same time. you only had like 3 instruments play at the same time max! the cool trancey synth you used was pretty nice. but yea, be more original! dont just use the original song's notes, make some more melodies and harmonies of your own! besides that its a cool song. no ending though! nice bells. dont submit all the stages of a song, just submit the final version, and maybe, if you want, a demo. 5/5'd! check out my new song!

-Exodus