Well the first of the song is pretty good but the ending is pretty crappy.
Good
But far too short. Sometimes it is good leaving an audience wanting more, but leaving a piece this nice too short is just plain cruel. I give you 9/10, you lose a point for making it too short.
Also, is it supposed to be dessert (as in cake)? Or do you mean desert (as in Sahara)?
Rofl woops my mistake I ment as desert :P, Thanks alot and I know its a little short I just ran out of ideas for it, But maby I could remix it soon...
WHAT is danzmanz on about
this is really quite good like it dont listen 2 him hes probably in 1 of his moods i guess thats y hes got angryfaic on lol 10/10 5/5
Lol yea thanks alot man, Very much aprieciated ;)
that ending is pretty crappy
yh ur right it is pretty crap but the rest of the song is too short aswell not too good at all
Thanks alot for the honesty it was really aprieciated ;)
I love the harp strings alot...
It sounds really cool for midi...Also I love harps in it!
Thanks alot for te great comment, Very much apreiciated ;)
Maybe I was wrong about midi...
Though this was still obviously midi, it sounded quite nice. I would suggest getting Audacity Audio manager, you can make even midi files sound wonderful, basically audacity is great for converting file types, recording, editing, and effects like reverb, echo, and speed and pitch changes. Keep up the great work!
ok thx you should rate it too.
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