Gotta catch up on reviews...
I'm far behind! About time I reviewed this one. :P
It opens up much faster than your usual stuff, and it's giving me the impression it's going to develop into some sort of happy hardcore song.
Aah, there are the note progressions! Now it's giving me more of that impression. Unfortunately, I'm not so sure about that lead synth. Interlude. Okay... there's the buildup. Snare roll...
Well, the melody isn't yours, so I can't really criticise you there. Hah! Your synth, however, could have been better chosen. I don't like it that much...
Harmonies are decent. The bass is nice - I like that bass synth... and the pads, when used, are nice. No clashing notes or anything, good, but you could have made it a bit better. My thoughts for this are thoughts that belong on the piano roll, not in a review - though I can say some more variation in things like the bassline would have made the song AWESOME. Unfortunately, the quality isn't quite that nice due to an abundance of harmonies in parts - maybe it's the bitrate you exported it at... I hope it is. :P
Percussion is great, and I like how it develops and builds up. Drum samples are a bit questionable - I think that kick could have been a bit harder, bassier, etc. while still keeping some treble to it. The hihat was weak, too... overall, while it's good percussion on its own, it's not quite what I'd expect to hear in this kind of song. Hmm.
Overall, it's good, though not your best. I hope I'm not disappointed with your song Telepathy... :D Will review it soon.