It was good but could improve

There is always room for improvement, but this sounds pretty good for your second submission. Like the other guy said it is quite empty through out the majority of it. Good use of the voices cept for the pause infront of the first one I believe.
Continue on with your techno self.

I see your new to making music

Like the vox speech. Be able to stand ehh? Requires work...certainly. A bit empty song. I like when you add the bell like sound. Sounds cute and mellow. Your music is very original from other technos on NG. So 10/10 on that category. I think some better connections in the song is needed. Seems like there is a pause just before the vox speaks. Maybe I'm imagining it. So since your second song I like to start ppl in a good start. 5/5 voting and 9/10 review. Bye for now and always enjoy making music.