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Jun 19, 2017 | 11:41 AM EDT
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Song
9.9 MB
7 min 14 sec
Score
3.33 / 5.00

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Rated 3.33 / 5 stars
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Genres:
Electronic - Dance
Tags:
dance
energy
electronic
edm

Author Comments

Update: OMG A PERFECT 5 STARS IN LESS THAN 30 MINS, THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH, THIS MEANS A LOT ^^!!!!!

Behold, my entry for the tryout round of NGUAC, "Victory". I called it victory not because of confidence in winning but because of the vibe it gives off. This is officially my first successful EDM, there is version with lyrics and basically the lyrics are talking about how hard it was to come up with something good so that I can finally make an EDM, to the point where I wanted to die, it was that hard, but I finally found a way and here it is ^^!

I hope you enjoy this song and be sure to wish me luck and send any feedback so that I can bring you better songs ^^!

Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/lord-jabeebus/victory

Reviews


TaintedLogicTaintedLogic

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

The chord progression at the beginning is interesting, and by :15 I’m enjoying the full texture. I think the drums might need a bit more compression - the kick is struggling to come through the mix a bit, and the hats seem to be getting a little distorted by the other instruments at times. The anti-climax at :58 didn’t help the slow pacing of the piece very much, but the piece does flow well. As for the instrumentation, I think there are a couple of generic samples in here - the clap at 2:01, several of the synths, etc. I think you also need some stronger melodic content here - the repetitive layered harmonies at 2:01 don’t quite cut it IMO. The piece also gets very repetitive after a while, and definitely didn’t need to be over 7 minutes long. The mood and atmosphere of the piece are good, but the composition is pretty weak. Keep at it, LordJabeebus. :)

5/10


LordJabeebus responds:

Thanks for the feedback ^^, this is probably one of the mostly helpful ones I have recieved