Nice job with this...
Hmm, it starts out nicely. Some real atmosphere you've got here... I like what you do with the percussion, having it there in the second, third, and fourth measures in a set of four. I've done that before.
Your vocals I find a bit unnecessary, and you only use them in the beginnin of the song and forget about them later on.
It's very chilled out and quiet - your buildups don't fit very well, though the rest of your percussion does.
Your melody... well, it fits, I'll give you that. It's nothing I'd catch myself humming, though. It could have used a bit more variety.
You do well with your harmonies... no comments here. You had just the right amount of them - you avoided a mistake I happen to point out quite often these days. Nice job here.
No problem with the synth choice, though you could have put a bit more effort into your choices.
Again, at times you have some really good atmosphere, which is one of the highlights of this song. This is where you did the best, in my opinion.
Overall a decent song... it definitely deserves a better score than it does right now. I've voted 5... keep up the good work.