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your age just screams out in this one...particularly in the percusion. its not good/catchy at all. we might have to ideas of techno. sorry man. this could use some base lines, 2 & 4, organization, better mixing, and maybe a consistent melody.
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This is the uprising of the spaceboy! HE WILL RULE THE UNIVERSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Triented responds:
Oh and on the last review, it isn't a video game track, its a music story...
Review time
Well I reviewed your "searching for the spacboy" a while ago. So now I listen to this song. Forgot the "e" though :) Quite spacy, but not quite dark enough to be considered a rave. Your profile is light though so I can't complain. Pretty good song to hear but some parts you leave kinda alone with one sound going which slows the action down. Also the siren part is a bit too long. I can understand why you used the siren to have that atmosphery feel/spacy feel to it, just a bit shorter or less on it would make the song better. 2.5/5 was the score before and I am assuming a blammer gave you 0/5 on purpose. I will balance that out with a 5/5 , but review wise I give you 8/10. More action or make more busy. Nevertheless good job. Bye for now.
Triented responds:
Well, you will see that I am starting a music series called Spaceboy. Its going to tell a story, I thought the song was very fast, in fact, It is the fastest of all my songs as of yet. Thanks for the review, and I do hate blamers. I thought I made a big mistake by adding the cymbal. It sounds more like Christmas bells. And I don't think the siren was too long. If you listen closely, you will hear the longest siren stops at the precise moment and time, the siren wouldn't be juicy without length. But the end could use a little bit of work. Thanks again!
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hey man
nice work man! 5'd it...keep it up..
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