It's ok!
Well, I start with the critique first. That bell? cymbal? hit thing in the intro and here and there in the song!? What were you thinking? TOTALLY fucks this track up. It's so damn annoying. Sounds like you're a squirrel on crack and you want to charge ur lazorz. :P
If it wasn't for that this would have been one cool track alright. *sigh*
The rest was very nice. I liked the sound of the flute and strings. You could have done better. Stupid noob! >:(
Thanks for your vote, DarKsidE555! You voted 4 for Rucklo - Hopeless Redemption, raising its score from 3.90 to 3.91.