Sonic rush?

Hi there JJ. I enjoyed this. Probably not your best effort technically, but this track certainly has heart and is an enjoyable listen. :) Keep up the good work.

Mix is muddy (cutting some low mids out of the intro bass will help a little), drums are buried because nothing is sidechained, instrument balance needs work, master is too loud, and you know there are other chord progressions out there, right?
Other than that, you're on the right track to making some decent generic NCS house.