"Staub"
Kind of catchy, in its own way. I liked the little stabs in the backround and the chior melody, but the bassline could have been more steady, you know? I don't like moving basslines that much (unless if its Goa Trance) because they sound kind of silly. Try to come up with a bassline that fits the key signature, and it makes your head bob :)
As for the drums, I wouldn't use FL loops. Try making your own drum loops; its much more fun that way! Trust me :)
You are gonna be good soon, I can tell you that. Keep this up, and you'll impress everyone here very soon. 10'd, and 5'd :)
Could you review me and my friends song, called "Vampires Dream"? We'd appreciate it a lot if you did :)
Heres a link: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1850716&sub=725
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See ya later!