Man, this is awesome.

I know lot's of people aren't gonna get this, and theyll just vote you low because the whole independent (from everything produced) sound is something new to them, something edgy and slightly uncomfortable, ultimately bittersweet but they only taste something that isn't sugar. And there'll be people who'll just try and make you "sweeter". And I don't like that, because NGAP would lose a great deal of talent. As a great believer in NGAP I ask you: Do not lose this real indie soul which flows awkwaardly but beautifully through your'e work.

For once in a long time, I really cannot make any suggestions. To me this will always have a rating of five.

PS: Not to be harsh to him, but Death-9's work sucks, he's arrogant and trigger happy at banning users from reviewing. He produces wannabe produced unoriginal work in my opinion. Not saying I'm too much better, but in my opinion you should be giving him advice.

Love & peace.
5&10
Sorry for taking up all the space!

i like it

it has a cool backround melody, and when your synths kick in, it gives it a powerful yet relaxing feel, its weird

good job on this

eehhh

Your sounds were too halting, if that makes any sense to you. Let them decay fully, don't stop the sound halfway through - with the guitar I recommend using a pick and not touching the string until you actually go to pluck it.

I like the melody, but that's about it for this song. FL studio isn't the greatest software for this sort of music; look around for something that works best for you.

im impressed

this piece was sounded really cool. it was musically sound and well made.
you get a 5/5
(o and id appreciate it if u reviewed some of my music lol)

Trippy.

Very nice song. It has a great pleasant tone to it. I liked the harmonies you did. The guitar in it was very calm, and it complimented the heavier parts of the song very nice.

Good work.