nice

Your whole song sounded filtered, that made it sound dirty, not clean, which took away from the experience. Your getting closer to commercial dance trance, but your music needs to be exaggerate. Make the saws more toothy, the basses more crunchy... little steps like this help pump energy into your tracks. Don't forget to make your open hat have presence.

mx0

Hey

Just checking up on whats been happening with your music...and it sounds like it's been going good =D
Great song.
PS... IT'S TURBO TIME!!!!

WHEEE!

WAHOOO! ALL MY 5 R BELONG TO THIS!

Nice one! just get rid of the Harmony for the saw, that part threw it off... WONDERFUL.

Good job

Good job on the song. I marked it as best as I could to fit the song. Your filtering effect and slow intro to the melody with a background was nice beginning. The clap you brought in though I felt could have had a little more resonance. I like the bass you brought in at :43 but it seemed to kinda overpower the kick so maybe turn it down slighty I don't know. The melody was great. I like the part you added at 3:00 min a little fast arp but I never got to hear that much of it, it added a nice touch but it seemed to limited. To summarize, your arrangments were great and prevented any part from getting too repetative; your filtering was also good to along with it. You have the notes and theory down pack here so I can tell you put some time into it. Just bring somethings out a little more you have some great sounds don't let bass drown any of it out and don't hold back on the good stuff. Thats just my opinion hope it was of some help. Btw would you mind giving some input on a song my group has posted here? http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1850716&sub=725
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I love it :)

The begining was interesting. I was waiting for the bass line and when it came I was not disappointed. I loved it and downloded it :)