Okay...

Some of the chords are wrong at the beginning, and the drum really doesn't sound great either. But everything sounds pretty good for the rest of the song. Even though I would try and get a different instrument for the bass trumpet or whatever :P
If you did the tune yourself, (no MIDI) then that's really great to get all that right. Good job.

I agree and disagree with person below...

I loved it and do think it can be improved on, but there are many other ways to make good music than "make it techno." Just do what you like, and sell it to that group of people.

As for making it better, I'm not familiar with the software used, but more realistic instruments would make this much better.

I loved it but you can do it better

this is a good intro to the rest of the song
cut it into half, then pic it up with a huge, major, kick ass, tecno bit with back beets like no ones bizness. then you got a good song
im cereal you need to do that

i loved tis

i used to have a link to the past 4 super nintendo.

nice man!

nice song man good instruments and nice rhytm almost exactly as original 10 for you!