Good for a first.

the bass at the begining was ok, but a bit too distorted and the rise and fall effect wasnt rly sutable for it, the drums were ok, sum times i like simple and easy drums. wheres the bass once the main started? could of had sum but kept it a low volume, BUT at least there were strings, i like ambient techno & dance ^_^

have fun making ur next song, PLUS wat program u guys use? MT2, FL6, Reason or OTHER?

l8r