I'm taking any and all opinions on this! It was inspired by a very cute game that I've never played, but whose music I love (Disasterpeace is amazing). Could this piece be used for a game? I'd like it to loop, but my loop point is a bit messed up so I'll fix it...
As it says in my profile description, I'm still learning to implement my composition skills from being the centre of one's attention, to being something that's merely in the background, making everything on screen more enjoyable.
I'm still learning, so feedback is greatly appreciated. Be honest, be kind.
Thank you :)
Made using NI Massive and some drum sounds in Cubase's free Halion Sonic instrument plugin
doooood I fucking love all of your work! :)
I think you have 2 amazing qualities (which are my favorites):
You don't write anything wrong, but you also have no problem with writing odd bits (and doing that right too!)
secondly: anything you make just sounds like itself. you know music!
YEA BABY! up you go!!
BibleThump. Thank you! That means so much. :') However, I will remain slightly insecure and humble but still motivated to keep writing and learning! I'm glad you liked the song :)
Love this! I scouted you by the way!
Wow, thank you. Much appreciated! I'm glad you like the song
This song is freakin' cute! I like it ^^ Works really well!
It's very minimalistic, but that's it's strong point in this case. You've done a good job with making a repetetive melody interesting. You've got the structure nailed as well, by adding instruments and small changes the song stays interesting.
The bridge part at 01:29 is also very nice, and I really like the change you go for at 01:42. From slightly sinister and exciting to light and cheery. Seriously, that contrast makes the 01:42 part so much more bright and uplifting!
I probably don't have anything bad to say about this song, what it strives to achieve it does achieve. So nice work :)
Also, if you have trouble with looping, just send me a PM and I'll probably be able to give you some advice.
Thank you so much for that :) It really means a lot! I was about to go lie on the bed and play Zelda and use the headache I have as an excuse to not do anything productive, but now I feel a little motivated to make more cute songs.
Yeah, the looping thing is an issue...I mean, if it was a super clean track without delays and reverbs etc, it'd be simple, but the effects tend to pop when looping, especially in songs like this :(
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
McGorilla42 
