Interesting. Perc could probably use to come up in the mix. Your writing is interesting though. I like it. Snare rolls are very nicely done. Maybe that plucky synth in the intro could come down a bit, and a bit more attention to volume could be paid. The song constantly gets louder, which isn't great in electronic music. Classical? You'd be A-ok, but not electronic... disco-y? stuff like this
Author Comments
It's my third song that I've written that's electronic. Hope you like it! Please tell me suggestions for improvement.
See my SoundCloud:
https://soundcloud.com/blazingboldly
I used GarageBand, but I did not use loops, because the GarageBand loops are icky, and anyway they aren't allowed on NG :P
Sounds:
GarageBand Default instruments,
Tru-Urban's Tru-Bass [An amazing plugin, I'd suggest it!!!]
Sidenote:
I think I accidentally scouted myself? I clicked a button and suddenly the "GTard has not been scouted" text disappeared. If so, I'm very sorry, I didn't mean to do that.
GTard responds:
Thanks so much for your review! I'm terrible at mixing, so I'll try to implement some of those changes once I redo this song in Cubase :)
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