Suggestion

You may think it sucks.But there is actually way too much going on at once, you need to know when to cut sounds out and save them for later,if you know what i mean.Dont try to fit as many sounds as possible all the same time.Your other tracks are decent, i like your effort, you need to expand and improve ;), then you would be even better.I hope you learn from this.

what the fuck ;)

That seems like it would be pretty good for something like hangover.

WTF!LOL!OMFG!

ZOMFG WTF LOL

check out my audio and tell me what u think
YOUR BUDDY: tomfitz

Yes,

indeed. But is has a fun factor, somewhere. Why not try to make an actually interesting cacophony? You know, with an actual title and stuff, so you can say you produce more than just audio filler?