i made this song just for something to do for a while, and it was only today that i noticed how long it was. Oops!!

The song starts of Chillout style and then turns into more house, electro type of thing.

This is only the first draft and i need to make it better. how can i do that?? please comment on what you thought and how to make it better! i only ever get one or two and they really help!!

it's in the key of A Major and it took about 4 days to make. tempo is 125.

thanks!!