=== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review ===
OOH YOU MADE CHIPTUNE! MY ONE WEAKNESS! I dig the chord progression you start off with. You also have a good sense of song arrangement - small tweaks on repeated sections, occasionally switching into new ideas, but not too wildly or abruptly. The biggest thing this song is lacking is a solid melody, though. Your melodies are pretty good right now, but IMO you just need to practice a little more at them to really make them shine. Even still, the piece has a nice groove to it!
(Also, that ending is so goofy! :o)
Mini-scores (See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
Mixing: 3/4
Arrangement: 3+/4
Composition: 2+/4
Overall (this is not an average): 7/10
lokimiah1 
