Interesting song! I like the ideas that you implemented into the submission, but I wish that they were clearer and more coherent. For example, I would have made the basses less gritty, to help with the overall quality of the song. You have to be very careful when it comes to the grit of a bass. If you overdose a bass with it, as you did in this song, then it can ruin the overall quality of the submission. Very nice piece though, but you need to touch up on just a few things. Besides that, everything was amazing.