I like it

As a work in progress its good... though my right ear is sore after listening to it a couple times, maybe even out the volume there.

I'm not a musician, and i doubt my tips will help.

Dunno if this would improve your song, but try to include a violen. Possibly about the fifth measure in, or about 12 seconds in depending on how you wanna look at it. Something slow but deep, building up into a crosendo.. croshendo? I'm not sure how it's spelled.. but it'd be like.. well, the way i see it is that this is like looking at a bunch of flowers.. but just the flowers.. you don't see their green leaves or stems.. what i'm saying is that you need an instrument to provide that greenery to the peice.
I'm not good at giving musical advice.. i'm a gamer not a musician > <
but i hope this helps you in some way. Good luck

Neat.

Sounds a bit fearful, thus it's title. Kinda gets annoying a bit, but it's a pretty good loop.

Keep it up!
8/10 & 3/5

hmmm

i like it...its nice and flowing...and there is no such thing as too much piano hahah!!! great short...hope to hear more :)

well..

well, not bad... but too much piano... i guess its just my opinion.
others might tell you something better than me :p so no worries !