I like the quirky instruments and drop at :24. I thought the kick could've been a little stronger, but I enjoyed the retro-game-style effects. The melody at :46 is cool. The breakdown section was a welcome change-of-pace, but I thought you may have dragged out the build-up into 2:05 a little too much. It just seemed that the progression was a lot slower than the rest of the piece when you extended that build-up the extra four measures IMO. Maybe it's not that big of a deal though. Overall, I liked it, but it's pretty mellow. I thought you could've done more with this piece. That said, I recognize that you've got finals and stuff. ;) Keep up the good work!