i had a hard time making it sound good. review me! ^-^
good but not great
it's catchy but it lacks composure and mastery (i think you actually went back and rereleased this, yes?) the "won battle remade" was awesome. i'm guessing this is the old version. the only problem with this one is it feels so generic. it's not passionate and deep like your other stuff. but again if this is just the old version, you don't even need to listen to this review. you already fixed it.
yea i fixed the problem to my first one, but ill reply to you cause u looooooooooovvvvvveeee my music muahahahaaaaaaaaaa! umm....ermm.....lol sorry anyways this one can't be such a won battle themed for a fantasy medieval aged game cause it sounds to electronic that's why i went back to remake in a different way.
common
I have little concept of music(making) but this track seems pretty transparent, so i'll just tell what i believe disturbed me:
The second Instrument (or how to call that..) beginning at second 7 is not nice, it's endless-tearing-depressing-boring, the third (second 14) is very nice, but the fact that the song consists only of identical loops (yes, except the end) makes it very dull - and short.
I don't see the effort of the previous track.
yea, i kind of see. you kinda discouraged me to make music but it also helped me out what you told me. well keep reviewing i'm all open =)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
aspachi 
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