Nice song dude, I like the... seagulls? at the beginning! xD I really like the melodies as well!
Also at that part right before the drop there is a lone snare drum which I feel could have had some effects on it... and 1 or 2 transitions need some improving! but over all it is a really nice song I like it a lot man! good job! this style sounds a bit like F-777s style and I think it suits you!
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niborbobbin:
I really wanted to put in a part for you... I understand a few of your points but 0 star, yes that evident sytrus preset at 1:52 was a bad move as it is easily recognizable but 0 star... I dont think he deserves that... your comment seemed like you were just out to get him... but as I said there were a few points you stated that were valid but the 0 was uncalled for.

Ok. So:

The intro piano and synth where clearly presets from a synth such as sytrus in fl studio. The drums where silly and not properly EQ'd. The melody and lack of bass made the song very boring and bland.

Parts of the melody do not even work with the song (1:00). That needs to be fixed as soon as possible. 1:20 where the song goes up in tune is also pretty bad because parts of the song stay in their tuning resulting in a discorse in the song (i.e. very painful to hear).

1:52: That is the sytrus preset, again a bad move as it makes the song obviously cheap.

I dont think there is anything you could do to save this song other than:
Change the drums to be constant
Stop with the "du du du du du" of the piano because its boring
Stop using presets and craft sounds to a more professional sound
Dont allow sections of songs to be in a different tuning.
Be more creative in your melodies and get some harmonies in there