*THAT DROP THO!* *WOOP WOOP* *YAS*
*WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE*
but srsly:
nice melody, like it... ish... not rly
I understand this is your 1st song so imma gonna give you some: *TOP TIPS*
there are 2 builds... which is just NEIN, ITS MADNESS
the second melody, i'm not sure if u intended that to be a bass, if so make it lower.
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2 words:
THE_DROP! is... it.... yeh, its needs some work.