Sedond draft. Need feedback. I know theres a lot to work on.
Pretty tight man
I loved the melody and thought the DNB speed is good (Really DNB needs heavier bass, Hence drum and Bass)
I gave you a 0 for clarity because you gave the echo too much "umph"
had you softened it just a little bit it actually would have fit perficly.
If you do all of that and diversify the drums more you could get a really good song. :)
that echo seems to be drawing complaints so yeah its being worked on. However it sounds fine to me...then again it may sound horrible on head phones or comp speakers so Ill run this through lower quality out puts so that it sounds great every where.
And yeah I'm waiting to finish all the unheard melodies before i begin the drum diversity and effects.
5 is just for the feedback.
1: the high sound got to move lower.
2: the synth sound must be less synth ( put some bass under it or something [ first melody ]
3: the melody is cool ( you must keep that synth)
[ 2nd melody ]( but you might let the echo out of it)
4: the drum isn't drumm and base * this might lead to peoples that want to listen to D&B and get this sound , and they are not used to it , so they blame it )
5: more melody
6: i doubt that i will listen to your full version , but i hope to, keep up the great work
( i think it's cool that you keep goping with the project even if it gets blamed by other peoples)
1. not sure what you mean by high sound...I'll look out for it though
2. will do
3. yeah echos goin
4 yeah I did that becuase I had no clue what this was and I figured I'd get more responses here...not my most honest move...but honestly what genre would this be?
5. Still adding moree and more melody. That seems to be my talented area...tweeking samples and precussion are still weak points.
6. Well I when its done it will be MUCH different so do try if you can but ont expect for awhile.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Tom-Fanboy 
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