:((((

Really.

your title really shows me you joy, and your interest in making music. It shows the effort you put in your songs. It shows how much you care about music. Really much.
</sarcasm>

Well, this was actually not bad, it was good, but I doubt a loop would let me put that much into a review since it´s probably only something about 20 seconds long...

So... I didn´t like the trancebass (combotricomabination!)
But I definatively liked the clear xylophone thingy, which added a dreamy effect into your track.

You could add some countermelodies, an atmosphere pad and a kick-ass drum loop. That´s pretty much all I can think of.

Oh well bye.