I love the tranquil mood at the beginning and the synths. The piece has a sort of soothing continuity to it which I really like. You also created a lot of space at times of structural relief, like at :55. It didn't seem that sad to me so much as reflective, though. It's so floaty, light, and trance-like, that it just makes me want to think deep thoughts. I love the atmosphere here, though. I would also like to hear the lyrics. If you're still interested in having a vocalist work on this, I might be able to step up despite my relatively limited experience. If I had to complain about something, it might be that the ending cuts off very suddenly, made all the more jarring by the fact that this piece is so smooth and comforting. Overall nice job! ;)

Why does the person have to sound like a chipmunk? That completely through me off lol. Great sound though, it's very diverse and adventurous.

don't know why you needed to state twice that you were writing poems, some famous musicians write poems and it might turn into a song
well for starters the bells are quite nice, good amount of reverb there too
melodies in this are pretty upbeat and nice
this does not seem that fitting for someone who lost his only friend, in my opinion though
well all and all this song isn't that much sad as it is happy and upbeat
its still a good song none the less
keep it up m8 ^_^