Hey.
Nice mix. The melodies are background noise, and not really a melody. Its like the first melody didn't really stand out, you know? Well, it didn't stand out at first, but then you brought out a larger synth, and that was enough to crap out your compression. If you listen at the part where you bring it in, your kick drum dissapears.
The songs synths are kind of bland, even though they do fill up a substantial amount of white noise in the song. You also added a slight change to the original melody, even as small a it is, its nice.
The transition from one melody to the other was kind of nice, but I would have liked it to be more gradual, you know?
Thanks for remixing my song. You've inspired me to try remixing my old song :)
Check ya later.
-BN