Yeh this is shit. First off, you're going for trap right here, which usually holds up through a brickwalled beat and heavy vocal processing, you have neither, you don't have rhymes either. And you really REALLY need to re-think your name, Ill Minded might have sounded good when you thought of it, but it's cliche, and you can't even back it up. So here's my advice, Rhymes: Study them. Vocal lessons: take them, you need to boost your vocal capabilities if you're going to bring something new to the table. Flow: Fix it, rap is just writing for a solo transient rhythm instrument, in this case your voice, you still have to adhere to all the guidelines thereof.

Get back to the drawing board, and do it again, and also...find something to rap about that -isn't- Fame, drugs, or crime. You aren't a fuckin gangsta, Spice it up a bit and be real.